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LoX Mission 02 by paper-hero LoX Mission 02 by paper-hero
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AHJKKFJKDSAJLFD!
My collab with :iconameru: for LoX's second mission! Man, look at Ame's wonderful clean art and mine are messy scratchy sketches I'm sorry Ame I have failed you *crawls into a corner and sobs pitifully*

Actually I did start on a cleaner version but... the characters looked so stiff I said FK THIS SHIT and uploaded the sketch version. orz...

Afterwards: [link]
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VoipComics Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
More line variation. Thickness creates contract, contrast guides the reader. The top half is confusing the the reader while the bottom half does a better job in composition,

I recommend Scott McClouds Making Comics book. It's great for any artist regardless of whether your making manga or the Sunday strip.
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CelestialValkyrie Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
T-these two are adorbs/cool!! ROFL -love the face..palming-literally- and their fight stances<><>!!
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SakuraSadameWingz Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
That was so cool! >W< You should do more of these. ^^
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MarikBentusi Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Is it weird I prefer the sketchy versions? I think they're much more lively.
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aeriim Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student General Artist
BAWW THESE GUYS SO COOOOOOOOOL////
And ahh Asher's wish is similar to Lia's T ~ T;;; buhh little chilluns runnin' around.
I love your and Ame's art!!///
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C-WeaponX Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is sooo goood haha... i actually like this...
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RabuRabbit Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
dgkhgfdkdk that sunset romanchiku moterbike ride...........:iconzoominplz:♥♥♥
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paper-hero Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012
MOONLIGHT?
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ameru Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student General Artist
moonlight......... :iconpapcryplz:
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ameru Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student General Artist
MOOLIGHT
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